ExEmplars

Assignment Exemplars

Critique Exemplars

List two or more things you liked about your peer's project and explain why you liked them. (2 sentences.):

"I like the sample that he used because it sounds a little distorted. I think it adds to the vibe he's trying to create for the track. It sounds uplifting, but at the same time it has a kind of dark vibe/sound."

List one or more things your peer could improve about their project and give them a STRATEGY to improve it. (2 sentences.):

"I would add a real bass line rather than tuned 808's. I think it'll go good with the way the sample is; it'll give it more of an authentic sound. I would also add some jazz type of drums and a cymbal."

 

 

List two or more things you liked about your peer's project and explain why you liked them. (2 sentences.):

"I really like the DXL horn combination with the clapping at the beginning. It adds intrigue to the song. I also liked the repetitive horn before the bass and the drums come in. In addition, the drop adds intensity to the song. It gives me the feeling of expecting something incredible."

List one or more things your peer could improve about their project and give them a STRATEGY to improve it. (2 sentences.):

"A strategy to improve it would be adding a fade out. The song ends drastically, but with a fade out it will have an effective ending."

List two or more things you liked about your peer's project and explain why you liked them. (2 sentences.):

"I really liked how the volume changed in the clip (piano 80bpm), I feel like I really added texture to the song, I also liked the flute you added, it made the song have a better rhythm."

List one or more things your peer could improve about their project and give them a STRATEGY to improve it. (2 sentences.):

"You could add a fade-in at the begging of the song to make the listeners more exited for the song. And you can also made a simple fade-out before the drop so it drops harder."